maymcleen's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[waxweaver]

yeah this game is too good im giving up making my sandbox rpg 😭😭

kaiakairos responds:

no !!! dont give up !!

[Like This Game?]

good concept; poor execution

[Dot Dodger]

i have three suggestions - make a mode that includes multiple dots chasing you, make it so the closer you are to the dot the more points you will score (this encourages taking risks) and also the dot can't get you if your mouse is off-screen so the game is easy to cheese. this is very neat for something made in 3 hours tho

PixelationNewgrounds responds:

Thanks! I will try to add these, it was more like 2 hours because I had to setup a machine which took 1 hour.

[JustBouncing]

i have 0 idea how to play the game

[NO TYPE]

okay well this is actually pretty good for something made in PenguinMod; i was not disappointed in the slightest. the gameplay felt charming but it is a little confusing to figure out that the little thing that orbits your player is what activates those blocks that send you into the air. Once i figured out the mechanic tho, it was pretty fun. there were a few blind jumps which i recommend you should either zoom out the camera more or fix these jumps to make them visible. i also think the game would benefit alot from some more decoration in the levels, one thing the game lacks is some visual appeal to make it stand out. one more thing, when i completed the game and time ran out the game is unreplayable until the page is refreshed? idk if that's intentional or not but if not i wanted to point it out. overall though it was pretty neat

iteractiv responds:

Okay! regarding blind jumps, I'll probably add camera zoom
and also about the timer expiration: yes, the page had to be restarted. I made this game for a "friendly game jam" and did not add a transition to the menu after the end of the game.
I'll fix it all in 1.1!!

[MC Carol - Air Conditioner Edition]

why does she jump so damn high? it's hard to control